You have written a summary of what has happened in the story. Now how would you connect that to an Eq.How can you look beyond the obvious. Why do you think he stood up to the mangager? What was he doing? How is he similar to Greg in Brother Dear? Think about these ideas as you write. You need to look beyond. Also bring in actual text support to help back up what you are saying. I am glad that you targeted and discovered the key issue in the story.